If you could have it your way, how would you like to spend your weekend?
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Q. If you could have it your way, how would you like to spend your weekend?
I want to spend my weekend doing new experience like learning new exercise, going fancy places and taking so memorable and nice pictures. And then I would always like to leave my own essay which is productive and reminds me of my younger days.
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I want to spend my weekend doing new experience like learning new exercise, going fancy places and taking so memorable and nice pictures.
>>> I want to spend my weekend doing new experiences like learning a new exercise, going to fancy places and taking very memorable and nice pictures.
And then I would always like to leave my own essay which is productive and reminds me of my younger days.
>>> And then, I would always like to write down my own essay which is productive and reminds me of my younger days.
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