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The most memorable trip was when I visited to Hong Kong. My family went to there with package tour last year. There were many high buildings and famous street. Also we could meet a kind guide. We could spend an enjoyable time. During the trip, we could have freetime for all day. So my family decided to find a history museum without guide. However, it was not easy and we had to walk for a long time. My children looked very tired like me. We couldn't eat lunch so we ate some hamburgers. Next to our table, a woman was reading a book. So I tried that I spoke English to her. She was very kind and I could talk with her a little bit. I can forget it.

Hello [이름]!   I\'m proud of you because you have more correct sentences. Some reminders: 1. \'Visit\' is enough. 2. \'On a package tour\' is used. 3. \'All day\' will do. \'For\' is not needed. 4.  Don\'t forget your articles (a, an, the).   Teacher Venus^^   The most memorable trip was when I visited to Hong Kong. >>>The most memorable trip was when I visited Hong Kong. My family went to there with package tour last year. >>>My family went there on a package tour last year. There were many high buildings and famous street. >>>CORRECT Also we could meet a kind guide. >>>CORRECT We could spend an enjoyable time. >>>CORRECT During the trip, we could have freetime for all day. >>>During the trip, we could have free time all day. So my family decided to find a history museum without guide.>>>So my family decided to find a history museum without a guide.   However, it was not easy and we had to walk for a long time. >>>CORRECT My children looked very tired like me. >>>CORRECT We couldn\'t eat lunch so we ate some hamburgers. >>>CORRECT   Next to our table, a woman was reading a book. >>>CORRECT So I tried that I spoke English to her. >>>So I tried speaking in English to her. She was very kind and I could talk with her a little bit. >>>She was very kind and I could talk with her for a while. I can forget it. >>>did you mean: I can\'t forget it.