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I think that many people are afraid of them.
So they don't want to believe it.
In supernatural things, there are happy things or there are sad things.
That is the reason whey many people don't believe it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
It\'s getting colder as the season changes in your country. Be careful not to catch a cold. See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I think that many people are afraid of them.
>>correct!
So they don\'t want to believe it.
>>correct!
In supernatural things, there are happy things or there are sad things.
>>correct!
OR>>In supernatural things, there might be happy or sad things.
That is the reason whey many people don\'t believe it.
>>That is the reason why many people don\'t believe it.
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