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2016-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lisa

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What is the most unhealthy food you can think of? >>> Hmm... The worst food I think our bodies is carbonated Drinks! What do people need to eat more of? >>> I can't under stand this sentens.. Do you usually eat healthy food? >>> Yes, I usually eat healthy food! What are some different types of diets you have heard of? >>> I am [Name] interested about diets.

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Hello [이름]! Thank you so much for exerting efforts in doing your homework and I appreciate you making complete sentences! Keep it up!   What is the most unhealthy food you can think of?>>> Hmm... The worst food I think our bodies is carbonated Drinks! >>> The worst food I could think is the carbonated drinks that we intake!What do people need to eat more of?>>> I can\'t under stand this sentens..>>> Correct! Do you usually eat healthy food?>>> Yes, I usually eat healthy food!>>> Correct! What are some different types of diets you have heard of?>>> I am [Name] interested about diets. >>> Correct! 

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