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2016-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I listened to music entitled “Smile” by Nat King Cole which you recommend me during my lunch break. It is old music and it said you will find that life is still worthwhile, if you just smile. I like this sentence. Anyway, today’s homework. I agree it. Before I said, education is important in our lives. So I am getting an education with you but when I was young, I didn’t know education is important. I want my government that they have to invest a lot of money to our young people and our children for education.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!

I remember you said you like ballad songs and this song is very meaningful so I\'m glad you like it. Thank you for always doing your homework. Have a nice day! See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I listened to music entitled “Smile” by Nat King Cole which you recommend me during my lunch break.

>> I listened to the song entitled \'Smile\' by Nat King Cole which you recommended to me during my lunch break.
It is old music and it said you will find that life is still worthwhile, if you just smile.

>> It is an old music and it says that you will find that life is still worthwhile if you just smile.
I like this sentence.
>> correct!

Anyway, today’s homework.

>> correct!
I agree it.

>> I agree to it.
Before I said, education is important in our lives.

>> I said before that education is important in our lives.
So I am getting an education with you but when I was young, I didn’t know education is important.

>> correct!
I want my government that they have to invest a lot of money to our young people and our children for education.

>> I want our government to invest a lot of money in education for our children.

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