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2016-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I can't paly all the games well. For example I can't play card games, online games and many things. However, my husband and my children play games very well and they like playing the games. Sometimes I envy them. I also can't talk with them about the games. While I travel with my family, I learned online games with my mobilephone. It is not easy. I think while I play online games, it is to waste time. I want to save time.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [이름]!

In my opinion, it\'s better if you don\'t learn how to play online or mobile games. Many people are so addicted with those games nowadays that they sometimes play instead of studying or working. Thank you for making your homework. Good job! See you later.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I can\'t paly all the games well.

>> I can\'t play any game well.
For example I can\'t play card games, online games and many things.

>> correct!
However, my husband and my children play games very well and they like playing the games.

>> correct!
Sometimes I envy them.

>> correct!
I also can\'t talk with them about the games.

>> correct!
While I travel with my family, I learned online games with my mobile phone.

>> When I traveled with my family, I learned online games I could play with my mobile phone.
It is not easy.

>> correct!
I think while I play online games, it is to waste time.

>> I think while I play online games, it is a waste of time.
I want to save time.

>> correct!

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