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학생이 쓴 원문
Maybe...
However it is very difficult because we are human.
I think human is very danger in the world.
Many people want to be in a higher being.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I guess so. It\'s very natural for people to be selfish. I mean to think about himself or herself first before others. That\'s human nature!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Maybe...
>> Maybe this is true.
However it is very difficult because we are human.
>> However, it is very difficult because we are humans.
I think human is very danger in the world.
>> I think humans are very dangerous to the world.
OR>> I think humans are a danger to the world.
Many people want to be in a higher being.
>> Many people want to be a higher being.
OR>> Many people want to be in a high position in society .
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