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If I can have two extra hours, I will meet my friends.
I will drive my car for an hours and than I will meet them for an hours.
After I got marriged, I spent my time for my family.
Sometimes, it made me very tired.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
Go! drive and meet your friends. Try it once.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
If I can have two extra hours, I will meet my friends.
>> correct!
I will drive my car for an hours and than I will meet them for an hours.
>> I will drive my car for an hour and then I will meet them for an hour.
After I got marriged, I spent my time for my family.
>> After I got married, I always spent time with my family.
Sometimes, it made me very tired.
>> Sometimes it makes me very tired.
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