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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
So you dream of becoming a very rich person? I guess almost everybody dream of making it big or becoming rich. Everybody except me I think because I don\'t want a big house. I don\'t dream also of owning cars. Do you think I\'m weird?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
My dream home is to live my family for a long time in my life.
>> My dream is to live with my family for a long time.
OR>> My dream is to together with my family until I die.
And my house has a big garden and dogs live in my house with my family.
>> My dream house has a big garden and dogs living in my house with my family.
Also there are many managers for my house.
>> correct!
OR>> I also want many helpers/servants/house help at home.
I really want it.
>> correct!
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