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2017-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

학생이 쓴 원문

I was very upset because of my youngest daughter. She doesn't like the math. She has to do the math homework everyday. But she often doesn't find the answers. So she sometimes checked the answers in the key at the back of the book. I didn't know until last monday but I noticed her lie when I checked the answers it last monday. It is very difficult to be a good mother.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

I think it\'s not difficult to be a good mother as long as you enjoy what you are doing and most of all you are happy about it. Don\'t be upset Ms. [이름], it\'s weekend.^^ Have a great time and take care!^^

~Teacher Rain~

I was very upset because of my youngest daughter.

>> I was very upset with my youngest daughter.
 She doesn\'t like the math.

>> She doesn\'t like math.
 She has to do the math homework everyday.

>> She has to do her homework in math every day.
 But she often doesn\'t find the answers.
>> But she often couldn\'t figure out the answer.
So she sometimes checked the answers in the key at the back of the book.

>> So she sometimes checks the key answers at the back of the book.
 I didn\'t know until last monday but I noticed her lie when I checked the answers it last monday.
>> I didn\'t notice it until last Monday I noticed her lying when I checked her answers.
 It is very difficult to be a good mother.

>> CORRECT


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