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Hello Ms. [이름]!
I think it\'s not difficult to be a good mother as long as you enjoy what you are doing and most of all you are happy about it. Don\'t be upset Ms. [이름], it\'s weekend.^^ Have a great time and take care!^^
~Teacher Rain~
I was very upset because of my youngest daughter.
>> I was very upset with my youngest daughter.
She doesn\'t like the math.
>> She doesn\'t like math.
She has to do the math homework everyday.
>> She has to do her homework in math every day.
But she often doesn\'t find the answers.
>> But she often couldn\'t figure out the answer.
So she sometimes checked the answers in the key at the back of the book.
>> So she sometimes checks the key answers at the back of the book.
I didn\'t know until last monday but I noticed her lie when I checked the answers it last monday.
>> I didn\'t notice it until last Monday I noticed her lying when I checked her answers.
It is very difficult to be a good mother.
>> CORRECT
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