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When I was young, I didn't know Halloween.
But nowadays most Koren young kids and young people know it and like it.
In case of young kids, they learn about things in English academe and there are a small party to celevrate Halloween.
In case of young people, they take a party in Seoul but countryside not.
I want to attend the party, I want to feel about Halloween.
But I never believe because if I would believe the ghosts, they would appear for me.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Kathy
When I was young, I didn\'t know Halloween.
>> When I was young, I didn\'t know what Halloween is.
But nowadays most Koren young kids and young people know it and like it.
>> Nowadays, most Korean young people know it and like it.
In case of young kids, they learn about things in English academe and there are a small party to celevrate Halloween.
>> For kids, they learn about Halloween in their English academy and they celebrate it.
In case of young people, they take a party in Seoul but countryside not.
>> For young people living in Seoul, they also celebrate Halloween but not for people living in the countryside.
I want to attend the party, I want to feel about Halloween.
>> I want to attend and get to experience how Halloween party feels like.
But I never believe because if I would believe the ghosts, they would appear for me.
>> But I don\'t believe in ghost and if I do, they might show up.
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