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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
An amazing Wednesday, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Parents want the best for their children so even if English academies cost them a lot they still send their children their. Do you agree? You did a good job in expressing your opinion. Keep it up!(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, children have to learn their mother tongue first.
>> correct!
But it is important to learn English early.
>> correct!
If I know how to teach English, I want to teach my children when they were young.
>> If I know how to teach English, I would have taught my children when they were younger.
But I can not do it because my English skil is not good.
>> correct!
Anyway many korean parents want their children to go to the English academy to learn English to get school\'s high grade.
>> Anyway many korean parents want their children to go to the English academy to learn English to get high grade in school.
So I don\'t know to need English class in school.
>> So I think they still need English after class in schools.
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