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Most women like shopping but I don\'t like shopping.
>> Correct
or
>> Most women like shopping but I don\'t.
If I want to shop, I only visit one store and only buy something I need.
>> If I want to shop, I only visit one store and buy what I need.
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>> If I want to shop, I only go to one store and buy what I need.
Before I got married, I bought a lot of brand name products, so I couldn\'t save some money.
>> Before I got married, I bought a lot of branded products, so I couldn\'t save some money.
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>> When I was single, I always bought branded products, so I couldn\'t save some money.
However, after I got married, I just window shop.
>> However, after I got married, I just do window shopping.
It is important for me to save money now.
>> Correct
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>> Saving is a priority for me now.
However, my family like shopping so I go to shop with them I have to wait for long time for them.
>> However, my family like shopping so, I shop with them and often times, I always have to wait for them for a long time.
It is very trying but I love to spend time with my family
>> Correct
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