17Jan2025_Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: How do you deal with your mistakes?
Answer:
I think it\'s important to admit it, so if it\'s my mistake, I\'m going to admit it right away. Because anyone can make mistakes. And I think it\'s more important than anything else to try not to make the same mistake. I\'ll have to go through the process of mistakes to grow to the next level.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! That\'s an insightful perspective. Each mistake can teach us something valuable, helping us develop resilience, adaptability, and a deeper understanding.
-T. Sonny
I think it\'s important to admit it, so if it\'s my mistake, I\'m going to admit it right away. >>Correct!
Because anyone can make mistakes.
>>It\'s because anyone can make mistakes.
And I think it\'s more important than anything else to try not to make the same mistake.
>>Correct!
I\'ll have to go through the process of mistakes to grow to the next level.
>>Correct!
OR. It is essential to commit mistakes to learn and grow.
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