`18.07.09

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for finding the time to write an essay.

I think Switzerland is a beautiful place. The country indeed offers a lot of beautiful and breath-taking sceneries.

I also want to go to Europe someday and I would like to see Austria.

I want to experience diving at the Green Lake in Tragoess.

It\'s actually a park that turns into a lake in summer season.  ^_^

Anyhow, keep on writing.

I will be expecting more essays from you.

See you in class tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry :)

If someone offered to give me a free vacation trip anywhere in the world, I would go the Europe, especially Switzerland.
>> CORRECT!

OR >> If someone offered to give me a free vacation trip anywhere in the world, I would go the Europe and I would specifically go to Switzerland.
The reason why I select this country is because I heard many positive news from my acquaintance about Switzerland.
>> The reason why I selected this country is because I heard many positive news from my acquaintance about Switzerland.
There are many great natural scene like mountain covered with white snow, spacious green land, etc.
>> There are many great natural sceneries like a mountain covered with white snow, spacious green land, etc.
There so many places to feeling the nature so I want to take a picture in that places with my camera.
>> There are so many places where I could feel the vibe of nature so I want to take a picture in those places with my camera.
Additionally, Switzerland is the country that has safe security to travel in Europe.
>> Additionally, Switzerland is the safest country to travel to in Europe.
That\'s the one of the reason many tourist in the world desire to go there including me every year.

>> That\'s one of the reasons why many tourists in the world desire to go there including me every year.