`18.10.01 Homweork

Hello [이름]!

I commend you for once again accomplishing your homework diligently! Your ideas were very logical and on point. Let\'s hope we never get lost in the wilderness though ^^ Keep it up and enjoy your holiday tomorrow.

~~Teacher Kate

1. It is very hard that knowing items that we need because I\'d never imagined a such situation.

>>> It is very hard to determine which items we need in such a situation because I\'ve never imagined myself being lost in the wilderness.
2. Although I\'d never imagined such situation, there are some items I could recall.

>>>Even though I\'ve never imagined being in such a situation, I know of some items that could be useful.
3. First, it is emergency food including clean water. 

>>>First of all, we need emergency food including clean water.

4. emergency foods are necessary because I don\'t have hunting skills. 

>>>Emergency food supplies are necessary for me because I don\'t have hunting skills.
5. in addition, if there are no any foods, I can do nothing.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>In addition, I\'m helpless without any food supply.
6. Secondly, It is survival items like knife and rope.These items are important because they could be used in many situation that we canoot expect.

>>>Secondly, survival items like knife and rope are important because they can be used in unexpected situations.
7.Finally, we must have calm&positve mind.

>>>Finally, we must have a calm and positive mind.

8. If we don\'t have this mind, oure sight (vision )will be narrow continuosly and we will get exhaustion easily. 
>>>If we don\'t have this mindset, we will not be able to think properly and we will get exhausted easily.
9. There is a Korean proverb like \"There\'s always a way out if you keep your head on straight.\" 

>>>There is a Korean proverb that goes, \"There\'s always a way out if you keep your head straight.\"
10. So we need to have hopeness even if we are lost in wilderness,

>>>Therefore, we need to have hope even if we are lost in the wilderness.