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2013-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Exhaust fumes cause a lot of ________, especially in big cities. pollution 2. Everyone should learn to ________ ( = save) energy. Using lights/lamps only when needed is a good way to do this. conserve 3. Nancy is ________ about pollution. This is why she walks to work instead of driving. concerned 4. ________ is much healthier than driving, and it doesn't pollute the air. Biking 5. David conserves water by not letting it ________ when he's not using it. run

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I hope you\'re having a good time. Take care and be stress-free! T. JanE ^^1. Exhaust fumes cause a lot of ________, especially in big cities.pollution>> Correct 2. Everyone should learn to ________ ( = save) energy. Using lights/lamps only when needed is a good way to do this.conserve>> Correct 3. Nancy is ________ about pollution. This is why she walks to work instead of driving.concerned>> Correct 4. ________ is much healthier than driving, and it doesn\'t pollute the air.Biking>> Correct 5. David conserves water by not letting it ________ when he\'s not using it.run >> Correct

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