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I want to live in one place but I can't live in one place. Nowadays, many people don't stay in one place. They want to live in the place which is made for education. So, they often move another place for their children. I want to live in one place which is the countryside because the air is fresh. However, I have to move the another place too for my children but it is very difficult because moving need a lot of money. The city of made for education is very expensive to live there.

Hi [이름]!   I really appreciate you doing this homework. Despite your busy schedule, you managed to still do this and I really appreciate that! Anyway, I\'m looking forward to checking more from you. I have seen some corrections I listed below. Please take time checking it too.^^I\'m hoping that you have a wonderful evening. I\'ll talk to you soon.     = Teacher Bella =     I want to live in one place but I can\'t live in one place. >> I want to have a permanent place to live at but I don\'t think it is possible. Nowadays, many people don\'t stay in one place. >> Correct! They want to live in the place which is made for education. >> They want to live in a place where they find it good for education. So, they often move another place for their children. >> So they have to move to another place for their children. I want to live in one place which is the countryside because the air is fresh. >> I want to live in the countryside because it has a clean environment. However, I have to move the another place too for my children but it is very difficult because moving need a lot of money. >> However, I have to move to another place too for my children although I know it is very difficult to do that because it requires a lot of money. The city of made for education is very expensive to live there. >> I find the city offering good education but it is very expensive to live there.