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2016-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't like reading books. However nowadays I am trying to read books because of my children. I think that when I read books, my children can keep their habit of reading books. But it is not easy because I often fall asleep when I read books. ha.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름],

I love reading books. I learned English at a very young age because of my love for reading reading. I started with short fairy tales which gradually become longer and thicker as I grow older. You are right, if your children sees that you read, they will also acquire the habit of reading especially your youngest child. So have fun reading Ms. [이름] although often times books are like sleeping pills.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I don\'t like reading books.

>>correct!
However nowadays I am trying to read books because of my children.

>>correct! (However,)
I think that when I read books, my children can keep their habit of reading books.
>>correct!

But it is not easy because I often fall asleep when I read books. ha.

>>correct!

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