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2016-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to make easy money in my life. Ha. Ha. But it never can be. Anyway, this is my homework. I like this quote. I can do anything but not everything. I want to be a good mother. I want to be a beautiful wife. I want to be a diligent manager in my department. I like a super man and a super woman. Many husbands, children and company want their wives, mothers and employees to be a super woman. However it is very difficult. In my case, I will try to be the super woman for my family. While I will try it, I get some stress but I will have a rest with trip.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름],

Well done, Ms. [이름]! Oh, you are doing great in most of your homework. Great job! See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I want to make easy money in my life. Ha. Ha.

>> correct!
But it never can be.
>> But it can never be.
Anyway, this is my homework.

>> correct!
I like this quote.

>> correct!
I can do anything but not everything.

>> correct!
I want to be a good mother.

>> correct!
I want to be a beautiful wife.

>> correct!
I want to be a diligent manager in my department.

>> correct!
I like a super man and a super woman.

>> correct!
Many husbands, children and company want their wives, mothers and employees to be a super woman.

>> correct!
However it is very difficult.

>> correct!
In my case, I will try to be the super woman for my family.

>> correct!
While I will try it, I get some stress but I will have a rest with trip.

>> While I try doing this, I get some stress but I will have a rest when we go to our trip.

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