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2016-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Sometimes my husband looks very tired. But he doesn't want to stay at home. He thinks that he has to work during his life for his family. It is very sad. In my case, I can work for my family instead my husband during my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
I think it\'s a cultural thing or a man thing to think that he must provide for his family because he is the man in the house or the husband. Well, it\'s a good thing but I know it has its bad points too. But what can we do?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Sometimes my husband looks very tired.
>> Correct!
But he doesn\'t want to stay at home.
>>Correct!
He thinks that he has to work during his life for his family.
>> He thinks that he has to work his whole life for his family.
It is very sad.
>> Correct!
In my case, I can work for my family instead my husband during my life.
>> In my case, I can work for my family instead of my husband while I\'m alive.
OR>> In my case, I can work for my family instead of my husband while I can.

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