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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Being with your husband and giving words of encouragement may sometimes not be enough but it means a great deal to him, I\'m sure. There are some instances that we cannot do anything about. Just encourage him always and I\'m sure he\'ll appreciate that. Be strong! You are trying your best to be a good wife, friend and adviser. See you in class!
Take care!
~T.Lynn
Sometimes my husband seems that he carries the world on his shoulders.
>>Sometimes it seems that my husband carries the world on his shoulders.
So I want to speak words of wisdom to him.
>> correct!
OR>> So I want to tell him some words of wisdom.
However I can\'t help him because I have no ideas.
>> correct!
OR>> But I can\'t help him because I don\'t know what to tell him.
I just tell him we are find now also I always will stay next to you.
>> I just tell him we are fine now and I will always stay next to you.
OR>> I just tell him we are fine now and I will always stay beside you.
We have many chances in times.
>> We have many chances in life.
I want to happy with my family to come many years.
>> I want to be happy with my family for many years to come.
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