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I would like to become my family's health better than now.
And I don't want older than now.
I also would like to become young forever in my life but I know it is impossible.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Have you heard of the Fountain of youth? Maybe, if you can find that, you can live forever young.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I would like to become my family\'s health better than now.
>> I would like my family\'s health to be better than now.
And I don\'t want older than now.
>> And I don\'t want to get any older.
I also would like to become young forever in my life but I know it is impossible.
>> I would also like to become young forever but I know it is impossible.
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