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Hi, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
I think parents need to sacrifice many things for their children. I hope the children in turn learn how to give back to their parents.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
It is very important to children for their future.
>> correct!
OR>> This is very important for the children\'s future.
However, many young parents don\'t take care of home schooling with their children.
>> However, many young parents don\'t take care of home schooling for their children.
I am trying for my children with home schooling but it is not easy.
>> I am trying my best for my children but it is not easy.
I think parents\' roles in life is one of difficult roles.
>> I think parents\' role in life is one of the most difficult roles.
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