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2017-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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It is very important to children for their future. However, many young parents don't take care of home schooling with their children. I am trying for my children with home schooling but it is not easy. I think parents' roles in life is one of difficult roles.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]!(\",)

I think parents need to sacrifice many things for their children. I hope the children in turn learn how to give back to their parents.

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn 

It is very important to children for their future.

>> correct!

OR>> This is very important for the children\'s future.
 However, many young parents don\'t take care of home schooling with their children.

>> However, many young parents don\'t take care of home schooling for their children. 
 I am trying for my children with home schooling but it is not easy.

>> I am trying my best for my children but it is not easy.
 I think parents\' roles in life is one of difficult roles.

>> I think parents\' role in life is one of the most difficult roles.

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