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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
Happy Monday! Don\'t be afraid to commit mistakes. You will learn more about life because of these mistakes. Yes, no one is perfect. What we can do is to make these mistakes right! Anyway, have a great day ahead and see you in a bit!^^
~Teacher Rain~
Most people want to become perfect and they don\'t want to show their mistakes to someone.
>> CORRECT
In my case, I afraid to make a mistake too.
>> In my case, I\'m afraid to make a mistake too.
But I know I can\'t be perfect so I have to learn my mistakes and I don\'t want it again.
>>But I know I can\'t be perfect, so I have to learn from my mistakes and try not to do those mistakes again.
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