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Nowadays Korean songs and singers are very famous in the world.
>> Nowadays, Korean songs and singers are very famous in the world.
or
>> Nowadays, Korean singers and their songs are becoming famous around the world.
I am proud of them.
>> Correct
My children like to listen to BTS music/songs.
>> Correct
It is very fast and hard for me to understand.
>> Correct
These days, many teenagers like very fast and noisy music like my children.
>> Correct
I can\'t understand this music when I listen to them.
>> I can\'t understand these music when I listen to them.
I hope many teenagers enjoy listening to ballad and classical music.
>> Correct
And then they can get comfortable like me.
>> Correct
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>> And they can be comfortable with it like me.
Ballad is my favorite type of music.
>>Correct
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>> Ballad is my favorite genre of music.
It makes me comfortable and calm.
>> Correct
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