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I am worried about bullying with my youngest daughter.
I think she is very kind but her friends don\'et keep her promise.
I don\'t know what to do for her.
강사 첨삭
I am worried about bullying with my youngest daughter.
>> I am worried that my youngest daughter is being bullied.
I think she is very kind but her friends don\'et keep her promise.
>> I think she is very kind but her friends don\'t keep their promise.
or
>>> I think she is very kind but her friends keep her make a promise.
I don\'t know what to do for her.
>> I don\'t know what to do with her.
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