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2018-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Regine

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Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger? When I was studying in Ireland, it was a great experience to talk with strangers. Most of Irish are so friendly. Especially when I was in a pub or club, it's really common to talk with everyone else. One time I was in a club on the day before new year, I met a lovely couple. The girl is Irish, and the boy was Turkish. And the boy was asking me if I was Korean. I said yes. And he looked delighted. I didn't know why. But he told me that he had been to Korea before and he really liked Korea. I was surprised and this unexpected meeting made me enjoy the night!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing the homework [이름]. You did great specially with the sentences and I admire your commitment to learn the English language. Keep it up, I\'ll see you in class.

~~~ Teacher Regine ^_^

Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger?

When I was studying in Ireland, it was a great experience to talk with strangers.

>> CORRECT.

Most of Irish are so friendly.

>> CORRECT.

Especially when I was in a pub or club, it\'s really common to talk with everyone else.

>>CORRECT.

One time I was in a club on the day before new year, I met a lovely couple.

>> One time I was in a club during New Year\'s eve, I met a lovely couple.

The girl is Irish, and the boy was Turkish.

>> CORRECT.

And the boy was asking me if I was Korean.

>> And the guy asked me if I\'m Korean.

I said yes. And he looked delighted.

>> CORRECT.

I didn\'t know why. But he told me that he had been to Korea before and he really liked Korea.

>> CORRECT.

I was surprised and this unexpected meeting made me enjoy the night!

>> CORRECT.

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