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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey Min!(\",)
You can try answering the homework question for the day if you don\'t have anything to say. I\'m also bored with my daily routine so I\'m thinking of going back to school. I can\'t decide what to study though. Let\'s find something fun to do with our lives or we might die of boredom.(\",)
~T. Lynn
Well, I haven\'t practiced English writing so long.
>> Well, I haven\'t practiced English writing for so long.
I don\'t have enough opportunities to use spoken English besides this class so I believe writing would be the second best way to improve making sentences.
>> correct!
But the problem nowadays is there\'s nothing to write! I don\'t know why.
>> correct!
My recent life is getting more and more boring.
>> correct
My daily routine is all same from Monday to Friday.
>> correct!
And even during the past couple of weekends, I didn\'t have any exciting or memorable impressive thing to do. So I DON\'T HAVE ANYTHING TO WRITE! :(
>> correct!(Too bad!)
So today I made decision like I\'ll just write today\'s diary or just what I did during the day.
>> So today I made a decision to just write today\'s diary or just what I did during the day.
Basically I had a normal, too normal day as usual today.
>> Basically I had a normal, too normal day today.
One thing is just the main light in the office was gone out suddenly with some electrical spark, so I had to do work only with sun-light through the window.
>> One thing happened, the main light in the office sparked then it had gone out suddenly so I had to work with only the sunlight through the window.
My office is quite bright with large window, but after about 3 or 4 pm, it was kind of irritating in working without enough light.
>> My office is quite bright with a large window, but after about 3 or 4 pm, it was kind of irritating to continue working without enough light.
So I kept calling and bugging...
>> correct!
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