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...bugging the maintenance guy to fix the light, so he visited my office in the afternoon.
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He fixed and changed the old fluorescent light into new LED light, so it\'s bright enough.
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New problem I feel is it\'s toooooo bright.
>> I\'ve got a new problem, I feel like it\'s too bright.
Probably I need some time to get used to the bright level.
>> I probably need some time to get use to the brightness of the new light.
It\'s better than working in the dark though.
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And nothing else for today. :)
>> There\'s nothing else for today.
It\'s already 9 o\'clock in the evening but I\'m still in the office.
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Why? there\'s nothing to do at home.
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I tried to study English and Japanese after work but ended up only watching youtube video trashes. God...
>> I tried to study English and Japanese after work but I ended up only watching youtube video trashes. God...
Time to go back home. I\'ll see you tomorrow, Lynn ~
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