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2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Today I'd like to talk about nutritional supplements that I've been taking nowadays. 1.Multi-vitamins: This is the most common supplement, as you cannot take enough vegetables and fruits everyday, I think it's kind of easier way to intake the nutrition. 2.Omega 3: This nutrition helps you for lower blood pressure and reduce the likelihood of heart attack and stroke. Both of my parents have high blood pressure, I believe it's in my gene as well, so I take this to prevent those adult diseases. 3.L-Cysteine: Many people don't know about this supplement. This pill is one of the supplement which I experienced a very positive effect so I don't miss taking this pill even a day. This is one of the amino acid which is particularly important for your hair, nail and skin. I started to take this pill because I used to lose a lot of hair everyday and my skin especially on my finger tips was so dry and even cracked in winter season. But since I started to take L-Cysteine, hair-loss problem got...

강사 첨삭

Hey Min!(\",)

Wow! you are taking a lot of supplements! I will try taking some of these supplements because I think they are really important. I\'m only taking multivitamins but  I think I need to take the others too. Thank you for the information you\'ve given me about these supplements.(\",)

~T. Lynn   

Today I\'d like to talk about the nutritional supplements that I\'ve been taking nowadays.

>> correct!
 1. Multivitamins: This is the most common supplement, as you cannot take enough vegetables and fruits everyday, I think it\'s kind of easier way to intake the nutrition. 

>> correct!
 2.Omega 3: This nutrition helps you for lower blood pressure and reduce the likelihood of heart attack and stroke.

>> This helps you lower your blood pressure and reduce the likelihood of heart attack and stroke.

Both of my parents have high blood pressure, I believe it\'s in my gene as well, so I take this to prevent those adult diseases.

>> correct!
 3. L-Cysteine: Many people don\'t know about this supplement.

>> correct!

This pill is one of the supplement which I experienced a very positive effect so I don\'t miss taking this pill even a day.

>> correct!
 This is one of the amino acids which is particularly important for your hair, nail and skin.

>> correct!

I started to take this pill because I used to lose a lot of hair every day and my skin especially on my finger tips was so dry and even cracked in winter season.

>> correct!

But since I started to take L-Cysteine, hair-loss problem got...

>> correct!

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