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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Min,
You are already counting your chickens before they hatch.(\",) Actually most of my co-teachers have a part time job after work. I wanted to do that too for the extra money but I have so many excuses. The truth is, I\'m getting lazier as I get older. This is bad! I need to find a motivation! Any ideas?
~Lynn
I think I\'m going to have a second job like a part time.
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I was feeling my budget was always short, so it\'s a good thing that I can make some more pocket money with that.
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One of my bike group members is running his business regarding building structure design.
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He said he\'s been so busy recently, he wanted someone to help him with his auto cad drawings.
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So I told him i\'d like to see if it\'s what I can.
>> So I told him I\'d like to see if I can do it.
It was very simple thing, just put all the measures on each spot on the drawings.
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It\'s going to take time but might be getting faster once I get used to it.
>> I might be slow now but I\'m sure I\'ll get faster once I get used to it.
I\'m so happy because it was kind of boring after I finish work in the office, so I always thought I could do something more productive.
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And he\'s a good guy, not really picky or annoying person as long as I know.
>> And he\'s a good guy, not really picky or annoying as far as I know.
I\'m already planning what I\'m going to do with the extra money. :)
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I think I need to reduce some hours for sleep because I\'m slow right now, hopefully I could increase the speed to do that quickly.
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