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2018-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I think I'm going to have a second job like a part time. I was feeling my budget was always short, so it's a good thing that I can make some more pocket money with that. One of my bike group members is running his business regarding building structure design. He said he's been so busy recently, he wanted someone to help him with his auto cad drawings. So I told him i'd like to see if it's what I can. It was very simple thing, just put all the measures on each spot on the drawings. It's going to take time but might be getting faster once I get used to it. I'm so happy because it was kind of boring after I finish work in the office, so I always thought I could do something more productive. And he's a good guy, not really picky or annoying person as long as I know. I'm already planning what I'm going to do with the extra money. :) I think I need to reduce some hours for sleep because I'm slow right now, hopefully I could increase the speed to do that quickly.

강사 첨삭

Min,

You are already counting your chickens before they hatch.(\",) Actually most of my co-teachers have a part time job after work. I wanted to do that too for the extra money but  I have so many excuses. The truth is, I\'m getting lazier as I get older. This is bad! I need to find a motivation! Any ideas?

~Lynn

I think I\'m going to have a second job like a part time.

>> correct!

 I was feeling my budget was always short, so it\'s a good thing that I can make some more pocket money with that.

>> correct!

 One of my bike group members is running his business regarding building structure design.

>> correct!

He said he\'s been so busy recently, he wanted someone to help him with his auto cad drawings.

>> correct!

So I told him i\'d like to see if it\'s what I can.

>> So I told him I\'d like to see if I can do it.

It was very simple thing, just put all the measures on each spot on the drawings.

>> correct!

It\'s going to take time but might be getting faster once I get used to it.

>> I might be slow now but I\'m sure I\'ll get faster once I get used to it.

I\'m so happy because it was kind of boring after I finish work in the office, so I always thought I could do something more productive.

>> correct!

And he\'s a good guy, not really picky or annoying person as long as I know. 

>> And he\'s a good guy, not really picky or annoying as far as I know.

 I\'m already planning what I\'m going to do with the extra money. :)

>> correct!

I think I need to reduce some hours for sleep because I\'m slow right now, hopefully I could increase the speed to do that quickly.

>> correct!

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