18Nov2024-Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Are you excited about anything coming up in the near future?
Answer: Yesterday GD said on the radio that he plans to hold a concert soon. I am so looking forward to that concert!!!!!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]. I am so excited for you! I hope you find time to see him perform live in his concert because I know you are an avid fan of GD!
-T. Sonny
Yesterday GD said on the radio that he plans to hold a concert soon.
>>Correct!
OR. GD revealed on the radio yesterday that a concert is coming up soon.
I am so looking forward to that concert!
>>Correct!
OR. I can\'t wait for that concert!
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