18th July.

Today I learned one article from the text. I left one sentence in my mind. The main concopt is not to waste your life and to focus on making your life valuable. When I saw it, I thought lots of things about me. I felt a little bit shamed. Do I really do my best now ? If not, What's the reason not to do it? When everyone achieve his goal, he can feel the happiness. It's very simple. If I want to be happy, I just find my own value in my life and try to achieve for it. But we have to be careful, we must not get a stress during doing. I know it's not easy. But we try and try.

Hello [이름]! Thank you for writing again. I really appreciate it. That is correct if you want to be happy try to find ways on how to achieve that. You are doing a great job in giving your opinions about the lesson. Please keep it up and I would be glad to help you every time you need help in understanding some of the questions or sentences. See you tomorrow! T.Faye   Here are the corrections to your composition: Today I learned one article from the text. >>Correct!I left one sentence in my mind. >> OK. >>I forgot to tell you another opinion I had in mind.The main concopt is not to waste your life and to focus on making your life valuable. >>Correct! >>Correct spelling: CONCEPTWhen I saw it, I thought lots of things about me. >>Correct!I felt a little bit shamed. >>I felt a little bit ashamed. Do I really do my best now ? >>Am I really doing my best now? If not, What's the reason not to do it? >>If not, what is the reason for it?When everyone achieve his goal, he can feel the happiness. >>When a person achieves a goal, he feels happy.It's very simple. >>Correct! If I want to be happy, I just find my own value in my life and try to achieve for it. >>If I want to be happy, I will find a way to find my value in life and try to achieve it.But we have to be careful, we must not get a stress during doing. >>But we have to be careful and we must not get stressed doing it. I know it's not easy. >>Correct! But we try and try. >>Correct!