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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Congratulations!
I am so proud of you. You did it because you really worked hard for it. You studied and prepared for the anticipated questions that\'s why you were able to make it. Let\'s aim for a higher level this time. I know you can do it!
Mahatma Gandhi famously said, \"You must be the change you want to see in the world.\"This simply means that if you want to see things change for example in your work place, then you must start with yourself first. Of course, we must change for the better and not for the worst. See you in class tomorrow! Have an amazing day!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Hm..Today\'s homework is difficult to me, too.
>> Today\'s homework is difficult for me, too.
In my opinion, many Korean\'s company want a lot of things to their employees like my company.
>> In my opinion, many Korean companies want a lot of things from their employees just like the company I work for.
For example Opic\'s level, Toeic\'s level and many qualifications.
>> For example, employees have to take the OPIc test, and the TOEIC test among other many qualifications.
When I heard that employees have to take a test of Opic for their promotion, I can\'t understand it.
>> When I first heard that employees have to take an OPIc test for their promotion, I can\'t understand it.
Also I thought many Korean companys must change their mind.
>> I also think many Korean companies must change their policies.
However I can never change it.
>> However, that may never happen.
So I decided that I have to change my mind and I am trying to get Opic\'s high level.
>> So I have decided to change my mind and that I should try to get a high level in my OPIc\'s test.
Last Wednesday, I took a test with opic it was my first time.
>> Last Wednesday, I took an OPIc test. It was my first time.
I was worried about it.
>> correct!
I could check my level with opic, today.
>> I checked my OPIc level today.
I got \"IL\" which is opic\'s level.
>> I got an IL in my OPIc test.
I couldn\'t believe it because it was my first level of opic.
>> I couldn\'t believe it because it was my first OPIc exam.
I am happy now but I have to try more than now because I want to get \"IH\" level of opic.
>> I am happy now but I want to try harder because I want to get IH level in OPIc.
I can do it. ^^
>> correct!
Also I could get it thanks to you.
>> correct!
Thank you. ^^
>> correcT!
Anyway, today\'s homework means.. I have to change the first I wish to see in the world.
>> Anyway, today\'s homework means I have to change first how I wish to see the world.
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