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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Your sentences are getting longer. Your grammatical errors are decreasing. Good job, Ms. [이름]! Keep it up!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
If tomorrow will be my last day to live, I will stay at home with my family.
>> correct!
I will tell them my love for them.
>> I will tell them how much I love them.
I will apologize my mistake to them.
>> I will apologize for my mistakes.
I will promise to meet next our life.
>> I will promise to meet them on my next life.
Last, I will cook the best food in my life so I will have dinner with them.
>> Lastly, I will cook the best food I can cook for them then I will have dinner with them for the last time.
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