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2017-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I didn't take care myself. So I am worried about myself because of my age. I have to do a check up a gynaecological examination. I am going to the hospital tomorrow with my husband. I ask him to go there with because I am very worried. I didn't do a check up for a long time because I had self-confidence about my health. It is my mistake. I think it is the bigest risk in my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!
We are on the age where we must be extra careful with what we eat and do. We can\'t stop from aging so I guess from now on we must be more health conscious. Do take care of yourself. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I didn\'t take care myself.
>> I didn\'t take care of myself.
So I am worried about myself because of my age.
>> correct!
I have to do a check up a gynaecological examination.
>>I have to do a gynecological examination.
I am going to the hospital tomorrow with my husband.
>> correct1
I ask him to go there with because I am very worried.
>> I ask him to go there with me because I am very worried.
I didn\'t do a check up for a long time because I had self-confidence about my health.
>> correct!
It is my mistake.
>> It was a mistake.
I think it is the biggest risk in my life.
>> correct!

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