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Yellow dust is really bad today.
Thess days, yellow dust storm often happend in my country.
So I ask my family to take a shower and wear a mask all day.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
I heard yellow dust or micro dust is a problem every year in your country but it\'s getting worse this year. Be careful so you won\'t get sick from this.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Yellow dust is really bad today.
>> correct!
These days, yellow dust storm often happend in my country.
>> These days the yellow dust or China dust storm often happen/occur in my country.
So I ask my family to take a shower and wear a mask all day.
>> So I asked my family to take a shower and wear a mask all day.
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