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In Korea many young couples don't want to have their children.
Also many singles don't want to get marride.
It makes difficult our future in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Do I get married or not? That is the question. I guess because of your population problem, this is a great concern.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
In Korea many young couples don\'t want to have their children.
>> In Korea, many young couples don\'t want to have children.
Also many singles don\'t want to get marride.
>> Also many singles don\'t want to get married.
It makes difficult our future in Korea.
>> It makes it difficult for the future of our country.
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