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학생이 쓴 원문
I always go on a dite but I wave a white flag because it is very difficult.
Sometimes we need a white lie.
My face sometimes become white as a sheet when I am surprised.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your wonderful sentences. Please study and review the corrections. Thank you for your effort.^^
~Teacher Rain~
I always go on a dite but I wave a white flag because it is very difficult.
>> I always go on a diet, but I wave a white flag because it is very difficult. ( Spelling and comma)
Sometimes we need a white lie.
>> CORRECT
My face sometimes become white as a sheet when I am surprised.
>> My face sometimes becomes white as a sheet when I am surprised.
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