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I like shopping like most women.
But I couldn't buy things for myself.
When I was young, I had to save money for my marriage.
So I couldn't waste money.
After I married, now I am saving money againg for my children.
They need more money to go to the university.
So I can't waste money again.
I always feel nervous about my old age.
Saving money is very difficult.
And I have to give up a lot of things.
Sometimes I feel very sad.
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~~ Teacher Kathy
I like shopping like most women.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> I love shopping like most women do.
>> I like shopping as most women do.
But I couldn\'t buy things for myself.
But I couldn\'t buy things for myself.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> But I couldn\'t buy things that I like.
When I was young, I had to save money for my marriage. So I couldn\'t waste money.
When I was young, I had to save money for my marriage. So I couldn\'t waste money.
>> When I was young, I had to save money for my wedding so I couldn\'t waste a cent.
After I married, now I am saving money againg for my children.
>> After marriage, I have to save money again for my children.
They need more money to go to the university.
They need more money to go to the university.
>> They need enough money when they enter the university.
So I can\'t waste money again.
So I can\'t waste money again.
>> I really can\'t waste money.
I always feel nervous about my old age.
I always feel nervous about my old age.
>> I\'m always worried about my age.
Saving money is very difficult.
Saving money is very difficult.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> Saving money is a difficult task.
And I have to give up a lot of things.
And I have to give up a lot of things.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> And I have made some sacrifices.
Sometimes I feel very sad.
Sometimes I feel very sad.
>> Sometimes, I feel very sad.
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