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2018-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I think they are all the value. I can not choose it. Free time is very value for me. I am becoming old woman, I feel that time is very important. Especially after I become a mother, I can not have free time. So free time is the value. Money is the value in our life too. Nowadays we must need money to do something. It is very sad but we can not avoid money. While I work at the company, I want to gain some recognition for my work. So it is very value too.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)

You are right! Recognition, free time and money are equally important or valuable. But if I can choose one, I\'ll choose money because even if I don\'t have time and recognition, I can eat all the delicious food I want. hahahaha(\",)

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

I think they are all the value.

>> I think they are all valuable.
 I can not choose it.

>> I cannot choose one.
 Free time is very value for me.

>> Free time is very valuable for me.
 I am becoming an old woman, I feel that time is very important.

>> correct!
 Especially after I become a mother, I can not have free time.

>> Especially after I became a mother, I cannot have free time.
 So free time is the value.

>> So free time is valuable.
 Money is the value in our life too.

>> Money is valuable in our life too.
 Nowadays we must need money to do something.

>> correct!
 It is very sad but we cannot avoid money.

>> correct!
 While I work at the company, I want to gain some recognition for my work.

>> correct!
 So it is very value too.

>> So it is very valuable too.

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