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Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
You are right! Recognition, free time and money are equally important or valuable. But if I can choose one, I\'ll choose money because even if I don\'t have time and recognition, I can eat all the delicious food I want. hahahaha(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I think they are all the value.
>> I think they are all valuable.
I can not choose it.
>> I cannot choose one.
Free time is very value for me.
>> Free time is very valuable for me.
I am becoming an old woman, I feel that time is very important.
>> correct!
Especially after I become a mother, I can not have free time.
>> Especially after I became a mother, I cannot have free time.
So free time is the value.
>> So free time is valuable.
Money is the value in our life too.
>> Money is valuable in our life too.
Nowadays we must need money to do something.
>> correct!
It is very sad but we cannot avoid money.
>> correct!
While I work at the company, I want to gain some recognition for my work.
>> correct!
So it is very value too.
>> So it is very valuable too.
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