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2018-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

Let me tell you about my office. I am working at an auto parts company called A Corporation. It is located in the countryside and it was established in 1991. It produces wire harness which is like a human blood vessel. Also the company deals with imports and exports. It has branches in a lot of countries like China, Slovakia, Russia and many more. I have been working here since 1995. My work is interesting and I get along well with my co-workers.

강사 첨삭

Let me tell you about my office.
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>>> Let me tell about my workplace.
 I am working at an auto parts company called A Corporation. 

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>> I am currently working with A Corporation, an auto parts company.
 It is located in the countryside and it was established in 1991.

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 It produces wire harness which is like a human blood vessel.

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>> The company produces wire harness which is similar to a human blood vessel.
 Also the company deals with imports and exports.

>> Correct 

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>> The company also deals with import and export.
 It has branches in a lot of countries like China, Slovakia, Russia and many more.

>> Correct 

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>> It has branches in many countries like China, Slovakia, Russia and more.  
 I have been working here since 1995.

>> Correct
 My work is interesting and I get along well with my co-workers.

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>> My work is interesting and I get along with my co-workers well.

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