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A few years ago, I attended a small concert with my children but I couldn\'t stay for long time because my children felt pain because of noise.
They felt music like noise because it was old songs.
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A few years ago, I attended a small concert with my children but I couldn\'t stay for long time because my children felt pain because of noise.
>> A few years ago, I attended a small concert with my children. But I couldn\'t stay longer because my children felt pain because of the loud sound.
They felt music like noise because it was old songs.
>> They thought that the music was a noise because it was old songs.
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