19,may
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강사 첨삭
Wow! You really impressed me with this composition my dear [이름]! You did really good.
I was actually smiling while reading your homework because I totally agree with what you said.
I just do hope that I could be as optimist as you are. :)
You have so many things ahead of you my dear. You are a very good student and daughter to your parents so I don\'t see any reason for you to fail.
Keep n believing my dear. Because I do believe in you...^^
Take care always and have a great day...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
How do you foresee yourself in 20 years? Would you consider yourself still successful? Give some examples.
I don\'t know.
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I can\'t see anything ahead of me.
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I\'ve lived under strict regulations at home and school for about 20 years through the curriculums.
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Five months have passed since my last semester was over.
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OR: Five months have passed since my last semester ended.
I eagerly desired for this time during my university life.
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But the only thing i\'m recently doing is taking Phone English class and applying for small companies.
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Like every kids did, i was so convinced of my life\'s success.
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I thought i would become president of some country at least.
>>I thought I would become a president of some countries at least.
how ridiculous i was.
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I\'m in the most important period of my life.
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In this period, my life\'s quality will be decided.
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I know the first job can\'t decide for anything about my life of course.
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but I\'m afraid of everything ahead of my life for now...
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Willian Shakespeare said \"We know what we are, but not what we may be.\"
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Sarang [이름] would say,\"I know what i am, but not what i may be.\"
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