190116 homework
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Hi Yun Chae! A great day to you! ^ ^ Thank you for accomplishing your homework and sharing something really unique! I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Well like I have said, this idea of yours; this imagined robot of yours is very unique! Instead of creating a hero, you would like and efficient and very helpful AI to help you with your studies! Awesome, I like it.
Your sentences were awesome too, just a very few mistakes with your articles. Overall, it\'s a very good composition! Keep it up! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
If I were to create a superhero, I want to call him Y-duts, because it is study if I spell it the other way.
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Y-duts is a very smart AI robot.
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This robot is made of recycled plastic, so it is not that expensive and every Y-duts has different colors.
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Y-duts has a size of fist and has wheel on the bottom so that it can roll around the table.
>>Y-duts is only a fist size and has a wheel on the bottom so that it can roll around the table.
It has a speaker on the back and in the front, there is its face on the monitor.
>>It has a speaker on the back and in the front, and its\' face is on the monitor.
It helps me with my homework and improves my grades by making a study plan and a learning environment.
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When I\'m depressed by the academic stress, Y-duts, which can also have conversation will loose my stress by talking.
>>When I\'m depressed due to academic stress, Y-duts, can also initiate a conversation with me that may help lessen my stress.
I think it would be very useful for me in many ways.
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I hope it could exsist for real.
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>>I hope my imagined robot will become real.
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