190215 homework

2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework: (Essay) How many of hours sleep do you generally need per night? Generally, I think 7 to 8 hours is enough. But for me, because it is Winter vacation, I usually sleep for 9 hours, sleep at over midnight and get up an hour before noon. I also take a nap in the afternoon. I think I sleep late because of my phone, and I get up late because I am a heavy sleeper so I can\'t hear my alarm well. Since I sleep a lot, I\'m trying two things to reduce sleep before the Winter vacation dones. First, I have to try not to take a nap. Second, I have to sleep early and get up early.

강사 첨삭

Good day Yun Chae! You did really well on this homework. I made very little corrections and check them below. I suggest for you to include a closing statement on your short essay to wrap up smoothly. Nevertheless, you were able to deliver the idea clearly. Great work!~~T. Dee

Generally, I think 7 to 8 hours is enough.

>>Generally, I think 7 to 8 hours of sleep per night is enough.

But for me, because it is Winter vacation, I usually sleep for 9 hours, sleep at over midnight and get up an hour before noon.

>>As for me, because it is winter vacation, I usually sleep for 9 hours. I sleep past midnight and I get up an hour before noon.

I also take a nap in the afternoon.

>>CORRECT!

I think I sleep late because of my phone, and I get up late because I am a heavy sleeper so I can\'t hear my alarm well.

>>CORRECT!

Since I sleep a lot, I\'m trying two things to reduce sleep before the Winter vacation dones.

>>Since/Because I sleep a lot, I\'m trying two things to reduce sleep before the winter vacation is over

First, I have to try not to take a nap.

>>CORRECT!

Second, I have to sleep early and get up early.

>>CORRECT!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기