190218 homework
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Hi Yun Chae! Thank you for completing your homework. I had a great time reading your work. Your writing skill is definitely impressive. You have a good grasp of grammar and a clear sense of organizing your ideas. Keep it up! ~~T. Dee
I usually show up on time or a little late for something.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Whenever I have to be somewhere, I often show up on the dot or just a few minutes late.
Let’s suppose that I showed up too early for something like the school or the appointed time.
>>Let’s suppose that I showed up too early for something like in school or at an appointed time.
If I got too early for the time for going to school, I would make a plan for the day and memorize some English words during the remaining time.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: If I come too early for school, I would make a plan for the day and memorize some English words during the remaining time.
If I showed up too early for the appointed time with my friends or my groups, I would call them that I came too early and ask if they could come earlier.
>>If I showed up too early for the appointed time to meet with my friends or my groups, I would call them to tell then that I came too early and ask if they could come earlier.
Unless, I just have to wait for them to come.
>>Otherwise, I just have to wait for them to come.
I think showing up too late or too early is not good, but showing up just on time is the best.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: For me, showing up just on time is the best option compared to showing up too late or too early.
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