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Hi Yun Chae! I agree with you. It is really important to be courteous whenever we are at a movie theater. I also like eating some snacks that wouldn\'t create much noise while I watch a movie. By, the way, look below for the corrections I made. Take careful attention when spelling the word \"distraction.\"~T. Dee

As a movie lover, I think it is fine to eat during movies at a movie theater, unless it is foods from outside. 

>>As a movie lover, I think it is fine to eat during movies at a movie theater, unless those that are discouraged food items. 
 The foods like popcorns or coke that is sold at the movie theater don’t have much smell and noise.

>>The food items, like popcorn or soda, which are sold at the movie theater don’t create much smell and noise.

However, if someone eats the food from the outside, like snacks in the snack envelop, will smell and noisy a lot.

>>However, if someone eats food that are prohibited, like snacks from the snack center, it will smell and will be noisy.

Then, that will be a destriction to people who are concentrating on a movie. 

>>Then, that will create a distraction to people who are concentrating on a movie. 
 Lastly, I think to be quite is the most important etiquette at a movie theater.

>>Importantly, I think that to be quite is the most important etiquette at a movie theater.