190222 homework

Hi Yun Chae! Thank you for completing your homework. I enjoyed reading it. There was good structure on your sentences and you also chose the right words. You were able to deliver your thoughts clearly. I can tell you were thinking in English while writing this essay. Awesome!~~T. Dee

I want to try cooking and wandering alone in my free time.

>>I want to try cooking and to wander alone during my free time.

These are also my bucket lists.

>>These are also on my bucket lists.
I want to try cooking or baking when I have my free time.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: When I have the time, I would like to learn how to cook or bake.

When I cook something, I usually burn up all.

>>When I cook something, I usually burn all up. 

>>OR: Whenever I cook, I end up burning everything.

Then, I realized that I have to practice cooking.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Because of this, I finally decided to learn how to cook.

These days, I am learning little by little from my mother how to cook.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: These days, I am  slowly learning some cooking methods from my mother.
I also want to wander around alone in my free time which I have never tried.

>>I also want to wander around alone, which I have never tried, in my free time.

I want to go to the restaurant, karaoke, and movie theater alone so that I don\'t have to care about someone with me.

>>I want to go to a restaurant, karaoke, and a movie theater alone so that I don\'t have to worry about anyone who\'s with me.  

However, for me, it is not that easy to get around alone. 

>>CORRECT!

>>But then, it\'s never easy for me to get around alone. 
I can feel that these activities can relieve my stress.

>>CORRECT!

>>I can feel that these activities are great ways for me to relax.

I will try these activties when I got stressed in my free time.

>>I will try these activities on my free time when I feel stressed.